Wednesday, January 29, 2014

UPSC CIVILS GENERAL STUDIES PAPER 1- ESSAY WRITING





Talking about ‘How to write an effective essay’, I usually hear people say, “Essay writing is an art”. Well, it is indeed, for the Civil Services Examination. Ever since its introduction, this paper carrying 250 marks has been the centre point. Getting a decent score of about 130 in this paper is a challenge. To take up this challenge, a strategy is required.

Let’s have a look at the instructions part of the Essay paper from previous year. It states: “Examiners will pay special attention to the candidate’s grasp of its material, its relevance to the subject chosen and to his ability to think constructively and to present his ideas concisely, logically and effectively”.
The instructions only, clearly show that the facts and analysis should be presented in a logical flow. If you want to make it through the main exam, you have to have your head straight. The aspirant should use his mind and articulate the points churned out in a nice manner.
While Essay writing is an art which can be mastered only with hard work and determination, there are some general yet well researched and highly effective tips that, we at Mytestbuddy, think can really help you:
  • Selection of the topic: There will be more than one topic given (In 2010, the number was four). The selection of the topic matters. Generally, topics are from culture and heritage, current political and economic issues, science and technology, social issues of relevance, environment and philosophy.
Let us have a look at the topics of 2010 exam.

  1. Geography may remain the same; History need not
  2. Should a moratorium be imposed on all fresh mining in tribal areas of the country?
  3. Preparedness of our society for India’s Global leadership role.
  4. From Traditional Indian philanthropy to the Gates-Buffett model- a Natural progression or paradigms shift?          

These are not conventional topics for which we get ready-made material. Every topic is analytical and requires your own views. Such being the topics asked, you should develop the art of writing ‘concisely, logically and effectively’. Let it be any topic, you should be able to present the matter constructively, with the general understanding you have evolved through reading and observations.
  • The Essay should consist of an introduction (where you strike the relevance of the topic chosen), a concise and logical body (where you present your arguments in favour and against) and a logical conclusion (where your views and suggestions are given).
  • While writing your views, take care these are in line with national consensus, constitutional and in tune with the cultural ethos and values. Extreme/radical views are not favoured (as an administrator, you are supposed to take a balanced view for the welfare society).
  • In support of your views, you can give basic facts and figures. Do not fill up the body with too much of it. What you require is more of analysis and views.
  • You have three hours time. This time should be planned properly to get that concise and effective essay. One may get tempted to write as much as possible. Do not commit that mistake. You can write around 2000-2500 words effectively after a detailed thought process. For the thought part, you apportion one hour time, jot down the points as rough work (at the end of the answer sheet), make corrections and crystallize. 
  • Plan the flow, effective arguments, examples to be cited, basic data to be given, quotations to be incorporated and all. An impressive introduction can be written in the rough space and perfected. These things will surely impress the examiner as he will find that you have gone through a brainstorming exercise before putting your views on paper.
  • And all these are possible only through practice! You may have lot of knowledge and facts with you, but penning down an essay requires real writing practice. . It doesn’t matter if have not attempted writing an essay before. All you have to do is try, try and some more try!
                
Civil Services Examination being one of the toughest competitive examinations in India, a solid strategy for clearing the exam especially the Essay questions, is essential to have the edge in this examination! Once you practise these simple tips for writing an ‘effective’ essay coupled with a good score in your optional, you are sure to enter the top Civil Services!



Essay Writing for Civil Service Exams


The essay is an area, which most students forget. It may not be possible to concentrate on essay writing due to lack of time. It’s fine. Even then you can be attentive ‘not’ to lose marks by making simple avoidable mistakes.

To talk about the essay,

First choose a topic you know. There may be proverbs or phrases you aren't clear about. In that case avoid those topics. The examiner may not be amused if you bluff an entire paper (essay paper only one question is to be answered!).

Another thing is to cover all aspects on a subject. The issue should be seen from all angles, before you reach a conclusion. Eg: In an essay on Sustainable development – the social, political, environmental view of the subject can be discussed.

It won’t be possible to start writing the essay straight away. You can create a good plan for essay before writing the actual essay. The upsc answer sheet is a big bundle with enough pages. You can do the rough work of the essay on the pages towards back.

Our idea is to create the essay which means we gotta make a Intro, body, and conclusion. That doesn’t mean that we will put “Introduction” or “Body” in writing when we start.  Take some time and make the Intro interesting. The examiner is seeing tonnes of paper, and he has to feel –“this is cool” or “hmm..OK”

There are many ways in which you can begin an essay. The way you can start essay depends on the topics. Eg:Through a small story with two people – one who enjoys its fruits and another who has been hit hard by the same. This works in topics like Eg: Globalization, Public-Private-Partnership etc. Thus the two views would be put in a subtle manner.The beginning must be attractive, well written and mistake free. Else the reader (examiner) will lose interest. 

After the intro comes the body part. The body must go into the subject – analyse the aspect from various angles.
Eg Essay on sustainable development there may be social, political, environmental views.
Social – how the uncontrolled destruction can lead to disaster. Here the touching story of uttarakand  or any flood can be written to highlight the issue
Political – how the international players are discussing the issue,what steps have been taken etc.
Environmental- how destruction of species, or monoculture can affect balance of nature
Each angle of thought can be made into paragraphs, thus the reader can watch how our thought on the subject unfolds.

I have always used  diagrams in essays, but i don't think its a common practice. 

In the conclusion part, you can bring your take on the subject. This conclusion should be in sync with your body. It would be bad if you preached nuclear energy to be an evil in the body of essay in full force and then ends with praise for the same.






SSAY ASKED IN UPSC MAINS over the years from 1993
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Economy 1. Protection of ecology and environment is essential for sustained economic development. -2006
2. Bpo boom in india. -2007
3. Globalization would finish small-scale industries in india. -2006
4. Economic growth without distributive justice is bound to breed violence. -1993
5. Ecological considerations need not hamper development. -1993
6. Multinational corporations – saviours or saboteurs -1994
7. Special economic zone : boon or bane -2008
8. Resource management in the indian context. -1999
9. Should a moratorium be imposed on all fresh mining in tribal areas of the country? -2010
10. Are our traditional handicrafts doomed to a slow death? -2009
11. The focus of health care is increasingly getting skewed towards the ‘haves’ of our society. -2009
12. Urbanization is a blessing in disguise. -1997
Education1. Modern technological education and human values. -2002
2. Credit – based higher education system – status , opportunities and challenges -2011Join the conversation
3. “Education for all” campaign in india: myth or reality. -2006
4. Privatization of higher education in india. -2002
5. Irrelevance of the classroom. -2001
6. Value-based science and education. -1999
7. Is an egalitarian society possible by educating the masses ? -2008
8. Independent thinking should be encouraged right form the childhood. -2007
9. Restructuring of indian education system. -1995
10. Literacy is growing very fast, but there is no corresponding growth in education. -1996
11. What is real education? -2005
Indian culture1. Indian culture today: a myth or a reality? -2000
2. Modernism and our traditional socio-ethical values. -2000
3. Youth culture today. -1999
4. Mass media and cultural invasion. -1999
5. The composite culture of india. -1998
6. The indian society at the crossroads. -1994
7. Does indian cinema shape our popular culture or merely reflect it -2011
8. Geography may remain the same ; history need not. -2010
9. From traditional indian philanthropy to the gates-buffet model-a natural progression or a paradigm
shift? -2010
10. Modernisation and westernisation are not identical concepts. -1994
11. New cults and godmen: a threat to traditional religion -1996
12. How has satellite television brought about cultural change in indian mindsets. -2007
13. ‘ globlisation’ vs. ‘ nationalism’ -2009
14. National identity and patriotism -2008
15. Responsibility of media in a democracy. -2002
16. Why should we be proud of being indians? -2000
17. True religion cannot be misused. -1997
18. Globalizations and its impact on indian culture. -2004
International issues1. India’s role in promoting asean co-operation. -2004
2. The masks of new imperialism. -2003
3. As civilization advances culture declines. -2003
4. The implications of globalization for india. -2000
5. My vision of an ideal world order. -2001
6. India’s contribution to world wisdom. -1998
7. The world of the twenty-first century. -1998
8. Preparedness of our society for india’s global leadership role. -2010
9. The global order: political and economic -1993
10. Importance of indo-u.s. nuclear agreement -2006
11. Good fences make good neighbors -2009
12. Terrorism and world peace -2005
13. Restructuring of uno reflect present realities -1996
Philosophy1. Discipline means success , anarchy means ruin -2008
2. Attitude makes, habit makes character and character makes a man. -2007
3. There is nothing either good or bad but thinking makes it so. -2003
4. Search for truth can only be a spiritual problem. -2002
5. Spirituality and scientific temper. -2003
6. Disinterested intellectual curiosity is the lifeblood of civilisation. -1995
7. Our deeds determine us, as much as we determine our deeds. -1995
8. Youth is a blunder, manhood a struggle, oldage a regret -1994
9. Useless life is an early death. -1994
10. He would reigns within himself and folds his passions and desires and fears is more than a king. -1993
11. Compassion is the basic of all morality would -1993
12. If youth knew, if age could. -2002
13. The paths of glory lead but to the grave. -2002
14. The pursuit of excellence. -2001
15. Truth is lived, not taught -1996
Polity, administration1. Creation of smaller states and the consequent administrative , economic and developmental implication
-2011
2. Evaluation of panchayati raj system in india from the point of view of eradication of power to people. -
3. Justice must reach the poor -2005
4. Water resources should be under the control of the central government. -2004
5. The misinterpretation and misuse of freedom in india. -1998
6. The language problem in india: its past, present and prospects. -1998
7. Reservation, politics and empowerment. -1999
8. When money speaks, the truth is silent. -1995
9. How should a civil servant conduct himself? -2003
10. Politics without ethics is a disaster. -1995
11. Judicial activism. -1997
12. The vip cult is a bane of indian democracy -1996
13. Need for transparency in public administration -1996
14. Whither indian democracy? -1995
15. Politics, bureaucracy and business – fatal triangle. -1994
16. How far has democracy in india delivered the goods? -2003
17. What we have not learnt during fifty years of independence. -1997
18. My vision of india in 2001 a.d. -1993
19. In the indian context , both human intelligence and technical intelligence are crucial in combating
terrorism -2011
20. Is autonomy the best answer to combat balkanization? -2007
21. The country’s need for a better disaster management system. -2000
22. Are we a ‘soft ’ state ? -2009
23. Role of media in good governance -2008
24. Judicial activism and indian democracy. -2004
25. What have we gained from our democratic set-up? -2001
26. Urbanisation and its hazards -2008
27. Food security for sustainable national development -2005
Technology1. Computer: the harbinger of silent revolution. -1993
2. The march of science and the erosion of human values. -2001
3. The modern doctor and his patients. -1997
4. Increasing computerization would lead to the creation of a dehumanized society. -2006
5. The cyberworld: its charms and challenges. -2000
6. The lure of space. -2004
Women empowerment1. Men have failed: let women take over. -1993
2. Women’s reservation bill would usher in empowerment for women in india. -2006
3. The hand that rocks the cradle -2005
4. If women ruled the world -2005
5. Whither women’s emancipation? -2004
6. Empowerment alone cannot help our women. -2001
7. Women empowerment: challenges and prospects. -1999
8. Woman is god’s best creation. -1998
9. Greater political power alone will not improve women’s plight. -1997
10. The new emerging women power: the ground realities. -1995
From 1993 to 2011
2011
1. Creation of smaller states and the consequent administrative , economic and
developmental implication
2. Does Indian Cinema shape our popular culture or merely reflect it
3. Credit – based higher education system – status , opportunities and challenges
4. In the Indian context , Both human intelligence and technical intelligence are crucial in
combating terrorism
2010
1. Geography may remain the same ; history need not.
2. Should a moratorium be imposed on all fresh mining in tribal areas of the country?
3. Preparedness of our society for India’s global leadership role.
4. From traditional Indian philanthropy to the Gates-Buffet model-a natural progression or a
paradigm shift?
2009
1. Are our traditional handicrafts doomed to a slow death?
2. Are we a ‘Soft ’ state ?
3. “The focus of health care is increasingly getting skewed towards the ‘haves’ of our
society”.
4. “ Good Fences make good neighbors”
5. ‘ Globlisation’ vs. ‘ Nationalism’
2008
1. Role of Media in good governance
2. National Identity and Patritism
3. Special Economic Zone : Boon or Bane
4. Descipline means success , anarchy means ruin
5. Urbanisation and Its Hazards
6. Is an Egalitarian society possible by educating the masses ?
2007
1. Independent thinking should be encouraged right form the childhood.
2. Evaluation of Panchayati Raj System in India from the point of view of eradication of power
to people.
3. Attitude makes, habit makes character and character makes a man.
4. Is Autonomy the best answer to combat balkanization?
5. How has satellite television brought about cultural change in Indian mindsets.
6. BPO boom in India.
2006
1. Women’s Reservation Bill Would Usher in Empowerment for Women in India.
2. Protection of Ecology and Environment is Essential for Sustained Economic Development.
3. Importance of Indo-U.S. Nuclear Agreement
4. “Education for All” Campaign in India: Myth or Reality.
5. Globalization Would Finish Small-Scale Industries in India.
6. Increasing Computerization Would lead to the Creation of a Dehumanized Society.
2005
1. Justice must reach the poor
2. The hand that rocks the cradle
3. If women ruled the world
4. What is real education?
5. Terrorism and world peace
6. Food security for sustainable national development
2004
1. India’s Role in Promoting ASEAN Co-operation.
2. Judicial Activism and Indian Democracy.
3. Whither Women’s Emancipation?
4. Globalizations and Its Impact on Indian Culture.
5. The Lure of Space.
6. Water Resources Should Be Under the Control of the Central Government.
2003
1. The Masks of New Imperialism.
2. How far has democracy in India delivered the goods?
3. How should a civil servant conduct himself?
4. As civilization advances culture declines.
5. There is nothing either good or bad but thinking makes it so.
6. Spirituality and Scientific temper.
2002
1. Modern technological education and human values.
2. Search for truth can only be a spiritual problem.
3. If youth knew, if age could.
4. The paths of glory lead but to the grave.
5. Privatization of higher education in India.
6. Responsibility of media in a democracy.
2001
1. What have we gained from our democratic set-up?
2. My vision of an ideal world order.
3. The march of science and the erosion of human values.
4. Irrelevance of the classroom.
5. The pursuit of excellence.
6. Empowerment alone cannot help our women.
2000
1. Why should we be proud of being Indians?
2. The cyberworld: Its charms and challenges.
3. The country’s need for a better disaster management system.
4. Indian culture today: A myth or a reality?
5. The implications of globalization for India.
6. Modernism and our traditional socio-ethical values.
1999
1. Women empowerment: Challenges and prospects.
2. Youth culture today.
3. Mass media and cultural invasion.
4. Resource management in the Indian context.
5. Value-based science and education.
6. Reservation, politics and empowerment.
1998
1. The composite culture of India.
2. Woman is God’s best creation.
3.The misinterpretation and misuse of freedom in India.
4. India’s contribution to world wisdom.
5. The language problem in India: Its past, present and prospects.
6. The world of the twenty-first century.
1997
1. What we have not learnt during fifty years of Independence.
2. Judicial activism.
3. Greater political power alone will not improve women’s plight.
4. True religion cannot be misused.
5. The modern doctor and his patients.
6. Urbanization is a blessing in disguise.
1996
1. Literacy is growing very fast, but there is no corresponding growth in education.
2. Restructuring of UNO reflect present realities
3. New cults and Godmen: a threat to traditional religion
4. The VIP cult is a bane of Indian democracy
5. Need for transparency in public administration
6. Truth is lived, not taught
1995
1. Politics without ethics is a disaster.
2. The new emerging women Power: the ground realities.
3. When money speaks, the truth is silent.
4. Whither Indian democracy?
5. Restructuring of Indian education system.
6. Disinterested intellectual curiosity is the lifeblood of civilisation.
7. Our deeds determine us, as much as we determine our deeds.
1994
1. Youth is a blunder, Manhood a struggle, oldage a regret
2. The Indian society at the crossroads.
3. Modernisation and westernisation are not identical concepts.
4. Useless life is an early death.
5. Politics, bureaucracy and business – Fatal Triangle.
6. Multinational corporations – saviours or saboteurs
1993
1.vision of India in 2001 A.D.
2. The global order: political and economic
3. He would reigns within himself and folds his passions and desires and fears is more than a
king.
4. Compassion is the basic of all morality would
5. Men have failed: let women take over.
6. Economic growth without distributive justice is bound to breed violence.
7. Ecological considerations need not hamper development
8. Computer: the harbinger of silent revolution. — with 
Nil Worldsfever.






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